A close up picture of woman's eye, the iris looks like a galaxy of stars
Creative Writing, fiction, flash fiction

Mine – 100 words written and read in a flash

This is a little attempt at some super falsh fiction, I decided to challenge myself to write a piece using no more than 100 words. The insipration comes from Lisa W’s three words – smile, diamond, and white, so thanks very much for this one Lisa.

Mine

I love the way the light catches your face, it makes me smile just looking at you. I see people stop and stare at you whenever we are together. I am in awe.

The way you hold their gaze is mezmerising and I feel honoured to be in your presence. Your flawless white complexion draws me into the depths of your soul and I feel you in the depths of mine.

I wish I was you. I wish I could emulate your charm and beauty. You have an effortless presence across my heart, my prized possession, my diamond necklace.

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As ever, thanks for reading, if you feel like commenting then please do, if you feel like submitting your own three sords then that would be ace, you can do it here.

5 thoughts on “Mine – 100 words written and read in a flash”

  1. Limiting ones self to a word count does tend to cause some writers to use brevity within sentences. You did not fall prey to that tendency while creating plush descriptions, easily “pictured” without a thousand words.

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